Thursday, January 23, 2014

My minecraft mod

In my minecraft mod  there is a dragon.
And a knite. And they have to kill it as a team. And you have to kill your partner in the end.

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  1. Miriam PetersonJanuary 23, 2014 at 12:47 PM

    Good report. There are three details. It needs an ending sentence. Each sentence needs a capital letter.

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  2. Miriam PetersonJanuary 30, 2014 at 9:32 AM

    Very good! You have an ending sentence now, good. You have capital letter on each sentence. Good work. Minecraft is a name so it need capitalized. And a knight. is not a full sentence. It need a verb. Knight is misspelled.

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